Hi Patrick,
Thanks for posting your swing, sorry for the delay. It sounds like you're on the right track. It's easy to get lost on where to focus. When in doubt, I would start at impact and work backwards. There are three things to monitor:
- How a swing looks
- How a swing feels
- How a swing performs
They all give clues as to where you should investigate next with your practice.
Transition does look like you could work on a few things, but I'd be curious to see if you can get into a little better impact position and follow through with a 9 to 3. I'd be looking to get a little bit better body rotation at impact by trying to lead with the hips a little longer in the downswing. I think it will be easier for you to do that if you know what the body should feel like in impact and follow through. I'd check out some of the impact drills, or if you're on the annual program, check out the "build my stock swing" program. It's a great program for understanding the foundation of each key movement and swing phase.
Happy Golfing,
Tyler