Where to start?

Hi, i am Chris from Germany. I am 51 years old, my hcp is 11 and i became aware of your academy through my hackmotion device. Your academy and approach of teaching looks very interesting so i thought i’ll give it a try. So, here is my swing. I tried to swing without any technical thought. The only thing i changed is my setup. As i became aware through one of your videos my shoulderline was pointing to the left. So i tried to align it to the target. I struggle with inconsistency and often thin shots. I tend to hook more than slice. Where do i have to start and which drills would you recommend? Thanks in advance! Chris