Transition/Early extension

Hi Peter, Welcome to the site! I like that you're taking a crack at identifying your main issues. Personally, I would start from impact and work backwards. So I'd start with identifying something to improve. Maybe a ball flight (hook, slice) or a contact problem (toe, heel, thin, fat) or a specific club (hit irons well, but struggle with the longer clubs). What problem we face leaves some clues. But I'll respond to your observations. 1 - I don't think your shoulders are too rounded, maybe a touch elevated, but looks like less than mine :) If you wanted to improve it, it normally comes from shoulder blade depression/arm connection 2 - Agreed, not a lot of side bend in the takeaway. Put that on the maybe list 3 - Agreed, folded and narrowed, so you could work on arm connection/width, which might help the set up look you don't like at the same time. 4 - Transition spinning/steepening I think is the biggest issue. Especially if you struggle with the driver. Steep early/shallow late usually causes the 2 way miss or one big miss. Good luck, happy golfing! Tyler